And he found a KFC


Prakash was literally bursting with urgency. He realized he should have taken care of it before he got out of his house. But now was no time for regret. There was no mall around. He was in BBMP area. And that was when he found the KFC.

Immediate. 

Profound. 

Relief ...

He had found a lavatory.

--  xxx --

1. I first came across the concept of 55 word fiction from cmus who blogs here. And I wanted to write one myself. And this entry is what I wrote.
2. BBMP - Bruhat Bangalore Mahanagar Palike.

Comments

  1. live freeAugust 27, 2012 at 11:49 PM

    And ended up spending Rs.70 :P

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  2. cmusAugust 28, 2012 at 10:36 AM

    LOL. Self experience, I presume, from the above comments.

    That's 55 alright. Yeah, I've this obsession of counting the words.

    Also, thanks for the free publicity. :D

    P.S. - Be forewarned. This will become an addiction. You might not write many, but you will not be able to stop thinking about short stories. :D

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